Try actually producing.
I'm not usually a negative person, nor do I usually savor negativity. But your comment alone instantly formed what I feel as a horrible attitude and mindset.
Buy logic pro, or any DAW and seriously take it all in, and produce from scratch. Do that, and I'll give you the best guidance you've ever had.
Has no logical theory or progession... Start from scratch.
Also, not a hint of any pleasurable mixing..try bringing everything to -99db and re-mix. And drop the compression, its not helping.
Other than that, keep going, no reason to stop.
Needs nothing more
I am totally stoked to hear this...However, aside from opening up the headspace and bringing the chords into the listeners foreground...I"m not sure what else it needs...Its certainly progressive and I'm very interested to see if you finish this.
I like the very well used samples. I'm at a loss of words for pretty much everything I do... So I'll leave you with one complaint.
Its too short and I'm almost positive you could've fit more on NG! :)
lol that's right. i'm currently working on a hardtrance lead + piano for this song. yes maybe it WILL fit on NG :)
Definately an awesome piece... Nothing I can even consider changing a thing.
Hilarious, awesome job mate.
Oh yay, some more VEC... They say the more of VEC you use, the more original you get!... SARCASM.
I agree, unless you want to promote yourself as a happy hardcore producer, try some new stuff, this happy lil, VEC rips, candy stuff is getting pretty much annoying.
On the positive side, the clarity is well, and the melodies are fine. But the clarity is simply good because the VEC samples are already eq'd by themselves.
Lets try some new stuff wont we bounce?
I usually don't review tracks. But I find this song particularly touching. Your a great composer and a wonderful producer.
I'd write a technical review like I usually do, but I don't have the time now, so you'll have to excuse me.
I really do enjoy this track, I might remix it. Keep that in mind, contact me about it. *website*
The clarity is an 8 because I found that it wasn't as clear and crisp as It should of been. Particularly the muted synth.
The effort is an 8 because I thought you could of spent a bit more on the clarity. *ding ding*
Keep in touch about the remix man, cyah later.
This is really great, sounds beautiful. However, it wasn't remixed... It was remade man, theres no different melodies or basslines.
Also, this lacks low frequencies... ALOT, its as if you put a High pass on the master, and dropped it to 50%.
Sorry for the small review. I enjoyed this track man!
Ah, thanks. I totally forgot about the word 'remade'.
And as for the 'short review' thing...don't worry. Its a lot longer than almost all the reviews i get.
Thanks for the review!
Its okay man!
I was expecting, say a copy of the actual song, with a few new things added... But I was wrong.
The vocals are somewhat un-aligned, but after they entered. They seem to get back on track. Good job on those, however you should of edited the actual WAV, and cut/EQ your own.
The melodies, were okay.
The crispness, and clearness of the song, was amazing. Good clarity.
The fullness of the song, at points, was good. But on an overall scale, things got boring.
That leaves me to give you a 8/10 due to the boredom I recieved.
Great work, very nice job!
Hey, needs bass!
Hey dude, I love this, nice crisp... Commercial sound... And don't worry about B0UNC3, its not him that does it as far as I know. Its his large, crazy, insane, fanbase. Great synths. I can't give you much of a thorough review right now, I'm sick with the flu, and have to go. If you wanna talk to me about it on MSN, AIM, or YAHOO. Just give me your SN.
Fantastic job! 5/5
Thanxz man.. add me on msn, firstname.lastname@example.org
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